Audience Feedback on Drafts for my magazine advertisement

As I have designed four different drafts for my magazine advertisement I have decided to show 10 people my drafts and then gain feed back from them on which would be the best for my finished magazine advertisement.

I asked the 10 people to choose which draft they would like to see when reading a magazine advertisement and which one would appeal to them the most.

Draft 1 - This draft received 1 vote for the best advertisement draft. The reasons for choosing this was because it is all set out well and everything is easy to view and find when looking at the advertisement.

Draft 2 - This draft received 6 votes for the best advertisement draft. The reasons what because again everything is set out well and all the text will work well when overlapping the main album cover photo. They also said that the use of the band website, information about the album and distribution logos work well being at the bottom of the page with the rest at the top.

Draft 3 - This draft received 2 votes. The reasons behind this was because it doesn't contain much information and the photo will be attractive for the audience.

Draft 4 - This draft received 1 vote. This was because it was much like draft 2 however, most of the people I asked preferred draft 2 therefore they choose that one instead.


After this feedback I have decided to choose draft 2 to base my advertisement on as I now know it will be attractive and well set out for my audience. Although I have decided to choose draft 2 I have also decided to use the stars from the critic review from draft 3 and use these when making my magazine advertisement. Overall I believe this audience feedback has helped me choose the best option for a magazine advertisement and this will eventually help me design the most attractive and best advertisement for the audience. As there is no colour on the drafts I have decided to use bright colours for the text so that they're eye catching and easy to read for my audience so there is no problem when reading the text.